Serochrim got back up on his feet from the dusty ground and walked towards the Cardinal that stood before him, surrounded by an etherial flow of crimson. Without consideration, the priest hauled the Cardinal’s unsoiled blouse with his dirt-stained hand. Glaring fiercly into his amber eyes, Serochrim spoke word by word.
“Stop hurting Veloce Visrin.”
Vocruen paused briefly, and went on with a grim smile. “Funny,” he said with ease, “because I should be the one saying that to you;” his smile faded as he narrowed his eyes, gazing back now with a dangerously still rage, “What have you all done to her that made her crawl across half a city with such a frail body, in tears and desperation, without any of her senses and an insane state of mind, retaining absolutely no hope in any living creatures except for me?”
{ Shimoyo }
Okay, NOW i notice something!!!!
Serochrim is part of the team!!! yay! Because Vocruen said “you all”. Or I am just barking up the wrong tree, and the “you all” refers to the people who have made magic illegal. Or something.
{ Shimoyo }
GAWD, the hawtness BLINDS me!!!
I can’t think of anything else to say. Which is weird. For me.
{ Kuroyue }
Haha, haven’t looked here in awhile. I’m getting busy too T_T. But anyway, I really like how you plan so far into the future with so much detail (assuming this is an actual future manga scene). But I’d like to point out that their necks are too long. It’s a mistake that maaaaaany professional artists do, many whom I admire too, so it’s nothing big.
{ DD }
WOWIE-NESS!!!!!!!!!! Vocruen looks so hot in this pic, as does Serochrim……*drools over keyboard* Poor Veloce………..*quivers in chair while imagining cool, calm Veloce crawling/crying* *goes to re-read manga*
{ Shilin }
@ Angy: yes Vocruen is the addressed as the Cardinal here.
{ rian }
omgomgomg this is just amazing. :0 and so sad. ;_; poor Veloce.. D: New character!! can’t wait to see him in the manga. n_n
{ bq }
OMG OMG OMG! my computer was broked and i was aparted from the net for like uh, one week, and today i come here to see news (OMG!!!!) and i see this!!!(OMG)! tx shilin! cuz i had an important exam today and even now i was super nervous (i get my grades only in 3 days T-T) now i’m home and see this very very very very nice pic/spoiler-not really spoiler and i’m totally awe-like and super happy! i have my little theory about vocruen and i was lol when i confirmed that he was the cardinal! nice work like ever.
{ cindy neko }
Nice pic! ^^ I love it! That is really amazing. I do wish there was more on Vocruen… Love it!! ^_^
{ Tomoki }
well, yes. since it IS manga you’re doing. ^^
4-komas and extras, maybe? i dunno, but from the comickers I’ve met, they always say that comics in a short, silly themes are better if colored, because they give out a bit more fun and brightness to it. :)
published comics here in the philippines are usually colored, especially those who have newspaper counterparts. colored ones can easily be found other than the usualy b/w, which are practically invisible in newpaper. XDD